HomeMy WebLinkAbout11-03-23 Public Comment - G. Gettler - Truman Flats #23148From:Gail Gettler
To:Agenda; Susana Montana; Anna Bentley
Subject:[EXTERNAL]Truman Flats #23148
Date:Tuesday, October 31, 2023 1:52:15 PM
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Dear Ms Bently and Ms Montana,
I am a long time resident in the Legends 1 subdivision. The way our City commission and itsplanners have handled the application, etc., for Truman Flats is a dereliction of duties as
representatives of the north side of the Bozeman. You turned your back when Homebaseabsolutely destroyed over 120 mature trees which were the home to many wildlife species
which traversed our neighborhoods. The gigantic piles of mature cottonwoods was like a hugepile of dead bodies at the intersection of Story Mill and Bridger Drive. In addition, you
have ignored your own decisions concerning design and have no idea what it is like to livenorth of the train tracks with the traffic jams they create.
I am in full agreement with the document submitted by Marcia Kaveny October 30, 2023. I
have attached it to this email.
Do your jobs! Protect Bozeman. We are not in the downtown city center where this type ofhousing makes sense. It's not too late to reevaluate this project.
Very truly yours,
Gail Gettler
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Gail Gettler
Friends of Kafika House - President
Formerly Friends of The Plaster House
1362 Pinnacle Star Street
Bozeman 50715
+1 406-580-1618
Canyon Gate – Truman Flats- 23148, Site Plan Comments
10/29/23
Marcia Kaveney
Dear Ms. Bentley and Ms. Montana-
Given that Canyon Gate’s applicant was not required to follow the general design standard of
38.410.010. B. Natural Environment, it is impossible for Truman Flats to comply with some of
the criteria in the required Site Plan criteria of SecEon 38.230.100. However, some of the
remaining criteria, if strictly addressed by city staff, offer a path to improve the non-compliance
of the Truman Flats site plan and help it become better integrated into its surrounding
neighborhood while making up for some of HomeBase’s poorly aligned principals. (Basic
Planning Precepts, pg.20, Bozeman growth policy.)
My comments on specific review criteria per 38.230.100. follow (in bold):
38.230.100. A.1. Conformance to and consistency with the growth policy:
The Bozeman Growth Policy includes goals for striking the balance between preserving habitat,
current neighborhoods, and new housing (pgs. 20,43,50, etc.). Truman Flats only meets the goal
of new housing. It fails miserably regarding working with the natural landscape and preservaEon
of habitat, in parEcular bird habitat, by the brutal removal of all its 150 mature trees. It doesn’t
begin to blend in with the surrounding neighborhood. The site elevaEons describe two buildings
that are classic examples of “anywhere USA”- something to be avoided according to the growth
policy (page 50). It could be a dormitory at any mid-level college. It neither reflects the former
agrarian use of the land it sits on, nor the mountains beyond. Furthermore, without added
awnings, the buildings, by design, will require more energy to heat and cool. Lastly, it is beyond
insulEng to any intelligent person that knows the background of Canyon Gate to read in
HomeBase’ Project NarraEve (002) that their Design Intent is the following, “Architecturally, the
goal is to enhance the natural, mountainous feel of the site while being mindful of the wooded
surroundings and picturesque se^ng.” A_er their heartless destrucEon of bulldozing every
single tree on the property during nesEng season, there are no “wooded surroundings” le_.
They singlehandedly destroyed their own “picturesque se^ng”. Who do they think they are
kidding? They are certainly not fooling me, and they shouldn’t be fooling city staff either.
However, I remain an opEmist and I believe that some of this poor design and destrucEve
behavior could be remedied by city staff if they take proacEve measures for the following site
plan review criteria (in bold):
38.230.100. A.7.a. CompaDbility with, and sensiDvity to, the immediate environment of the
site and the adjacent neighborhoods, and other approved development relaDve to
architectural design, building mass, neighborhood idenDty, landscaping, historical character,
orientaDon of buildings on site and visual integraDon;
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The roofline has inadequate “varying roofline expressions” and does not do enough to “break
up the building and bring it down to a residenEal scale and feel” as described in the project
narraEve (Doc.002). These buildings will appear as large flat-topped blocks both from a
distance and up close and they reflect neither a mountain style nor a farmhouse style- the two
most prominent architectural styles in this area. The surrounding area has highly varied
rooflines, and a variety of heights from single to double stories. The blocky four-story Truman
Flats will feel imposing and unfriendly when compared to the nearby lower structures and will
block resident and pedestrian views of the mountains- which contributes to the sense of place
on this north side of Bozeman.
While I appreciate the slight variaEon in wall configuraEon and it is helpful for breaking up the
long wall, it is simply not enough. My eyes are drawn to the 5-foot tall “parapet”. Perhaps it is a
railing for a roo_op deck. However, the resulEng 5-foot-tall gabled roof is inadequate for
breaking up the roofline. Removing the parapet to expose the full height of the gables will
provide beder roofline variability and will serve to complement the surrounding neighborhoods
and mountain backdrop. AddiEonally, on each end of the two buildings, requiring step-backs of
at least 10 feet would help offset the plain estheEc of the buildings, mimic the mountains
somewhat, and help the buildings fit into the surrounding neighborhood while providing beder
circulaEon of light and air.
Even beder would be to break up the two large buildings into 4 separate buildings with similar
suggesEons to design changes as above and it would greatly improve neighborhood
compaEbility and circulaEon of air and light. The fact that this might diminish the total number
of units in these buildings is irrelevant since HomeBase has apparently added 20 units to their
overall plan according to their Trip Comparison Leder (015) and will be market rate units, not
affordable units.
The applicant also referenced some white accents to be reminiscent of the snow-covered
mountains in their Project NarraEve. I think we can all agree, this is a stretch. What about green
or gold accents for the seasons without snow? Or barn red like the nearby barn? The exterior
elevaEons show lidle to no white. I see light gray, dark gray, and brown- nothing to get too
excited about. They can and should do beder.
(See Plan 129 A3.01 Exterior ElevaEons, Page 1 of 1., Document 002. Project NarraEve, Page 1.,
and Plan 124 A0.10 Architectural Site Plan)
38.230.100. A.7.d. Landscaping, including the enhancement of buildings, the appearance of
vehicular use, open space and pedestrian areas, and the preservaDon or replacement of
natural vegetaDon;
The applicant plans to plant 102 trees on the enEre Canyon Gate property according to their
preliminary plat presentaEon. However, on the Truman Flats site alone, HomeBase removed
over 111 mature, naEve Codonwood trees, which had a much larger canopy cover than 102
saplings will ever provide, and given the low success rate of new trees (i.e.50 % in nearby
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Legends City Park), the city staff should require the applicant to plant more trees than they
removed on the specific site and more naEve trees than not naEve to replace some of the lost
bird habitat. To comply with this criterion, the applicant should be required to increase the
number of tree planEngs to 150 in the Truman Flats site, the majority of which should be naEve
codonwoods to replace the type and size of canopy that they removed. Codonwoods are used
as boulevard trees in other towns such as Choteau and Malta with great success. They do not
spread like aspens but grow quickly and will provide much needed shade and ecological benefits
to humans and wildlife alike.
*Please also advise the applicant to remove all fruit trees to discourage bear conflict and
replace with naEve trees such as willow, codonwood, or aspen.
(See Plan 110 L300 Tree Plan.)
*Regarding bear acEvity- Truman Flats sits in the middle of an acEve bear corridor. Their trash
faciliEes appear to have open sides large enough for a bear to enter. These enclosures need to
be fully enclosed and have bear proof doors.
38.230.100.A.8. Conformance with environmental and open space objecDves set forth in
arDcles 4-6, including:
a. the enhancement of the natural environment (e.g., through low impact development
stormwater features or removal of inappropriate fill material);
b. Watercourse and wetland protecDons and associated wildlife habitats; and
Unfortunately, the first two of these three criteria cannot be met since Design Standard
38.410.010. B. was not applied during the Preliminary Plat process. Had it been applied, low
impact stormwater features would be possible, as well as protecEon of habitat since the habitat
and stormwater features were in the same locaEon.
c. if the development is adjacent to an exisDng or approved public park or public open space
area, have provisions been made in the plan to avoid interfering with public access to and use
of that area;
However, the last criteria, A.8.c. can be applied to an ongoing exisEng problem with the Truman
Flats/Canyon Gate Park Plan.
*Require the addiEon of a 3-foot naEve grass buffer to east edge sidewalk along Block 3 Lot 1.
This sidewalk will be plowed in the winter and the applicant has not le_ enough room for snow
removal and storage. All sidewalks in this neighborhood have an allowance of a few feet on
either side of a sidewalk to accommodate snow. Certainly, there is an enforceable code about
property line encroachment. If this encroachment is allowed to proceed, it will very likely
damage the integrity of the Legends II engineered retenEon pond. Fixing this seemingly small
detail will go a long way towards avoiding a likely problem while helping to build a more posiEve
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relaEonship between neighbors. If the design is not improved, it may create the necessity for
Legends II to fence their property in this locaEon to protect their storm water retenEon area.
(See Plan 023 Park Master Plan)
(The lack of snow storage along this sidewalk also shows a lack of considera4on for the Legends
II neighborhood storm water reten4on pond and therefore is also not compa4ble with
38.230.100 A.7.a.)
Relevant history:
I first made this request to planner Montana over a year ago and requested it again during the
Preliminary Plat public comment period. It is Eme to act and fix this error in design. The Canyon
Gate linear trail ends abruptly and awkwardly at the western edge of the Legends II stormwater
retenEon pond which is NOT A PARK. It is a private open space with steep sides. The CG
sidewalk then splits and turns both north and south at this juncture. The drawings show the
sidewalk on the very edge of the property line adjacent to Legends II HOA. Furthermore, there
have been references made to a public right of way for a trail in that same area. That right of
way was for Legends II and is now obsolete because that is precisely where the steep sided
retenEon pond sits which was engineered specifically for Legends II stormwater retenEon and
approved by the City.