HomeMy WebLinkAbout03-30-18 Public Comment - J. Moor - Strategic PlanFrom:Web Admin
To:Chuck Winn
Subject:[MARKETING] Strategic Plan Comment Form
Date:Tuesday, April 03, 2018 10:12:15 AM
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Form Name:Strategic Plan Comment Form
Date & Time:03/30/2018 9:53 PM
Response #:25
Submitter ID:5893
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First Name Jay
Last Name Moor
Email jjmoor@msn.com
Questions or Comments
First, this is not a strategic plan. It is a laundry list of generally desirable actions which are not connected to
each other by means of an overarching goal, prioritization of problems and assessment of resources. It is
not even what we used to call a comprehensive plan. It has no empirical foundation as a baseline for policy
priorities. I suspect department heads were simply asked to list their priorities and this is the result (unless
their is a much more detailed plan hiding somewhere.)
In my experience as both a city planner and head of strategic planning for a UN agency, a strategic plan is
an organized response to conditions and trends that addresses greatest threats, highest priorities and real
constraints -- both internal and external. I can detect no policies in this plan/"vision" statement that
explicitly do this. I see no analysis or even background information that would aid in formulating options for
the future or for setting priorities among those options.
Internally the document is unbalanced with some topics being given a mention and others treated as
already designed programs that simply need the go ahead. There is little or no connection among any of
these statements.
How committed are we, for example, to saving prime farmland as opposed to encouraging profit-driven
development anywhere in the valley? What are the quantifiable and intangible tradeoffs between
economic gain and environmental loss? What are the red-lines that cannot be crossed in the future if we
decide to prioritize one goal over another? Where is compromise possible and how would it be shaped by
our selection of goals? How can any non-economic goals be achieved if our politicians keep saying that
creation of jobs, jobs, jobs is more important than anything else, without realistically discussing the number
and full range of jobs/wages that come with various types of development? Why don't we require
submission of development economic balance sheets with developers' proposals? Why don't we use Ian
McHarg's Design With Nature and a GIS to determine environmental areas sensitive to development and
drawing functional lines around the most sensitive areas to delimit development? Why don't we consider
advance purchase of land for strategic infrastructure and facilities? Can't we adopt something like a system
of development rights transfer to equitably reimburse land owners for the public use of their land? Why
aren't we combining the planning functions of city and county? Why do we let the School District
determine the future land use pattern of the city? If the answers to these question involve state law, why
aren't we more involved in lobbying the legislature and educating the public?
What national and global factors could conceivably harm or boost Bozeman's sustainability? Must we
simply roll with the effects of externalities or is there something we should be planning for -- like the
impacts of an all-out trade war?
These are all questions that should be addressed by a strategic plan. Some may seem too irrelevant,
politically impossible or off-the-wall to waste city resources trying to deal with. But we won't know that
until they are brought into an objective planning process.
At the very least, I would start over by describing the issues we face -- existing and projected -- and try to
quantify their status and trends so the public can help decide on priorities. Then, settle on a handful of key
goals in support of which all other goals can be organized. Don't compromise too early in the process. After
all it is the planning process, with proper resident involvement, backed by good technical analysis, that will
point to strategic objectives and priorities for action.
Thank you,
City Of Bozeman
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